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| Name: Margaret Marr | MY URL: Visit Me |
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Interesting and thought-provoking poetry!
| Name: gollum | MY URL: Visit Me |
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"Come to me into thine arms
From the throes of your disaster
And I will rise where your father failed you
Let the wound bleed a little bit faster
Cast his face into the candle flame,
The wildfire of your deep nightmares
Free his soul into eternal ruin
The cold, pale depths of your blank stares
Don't be afraid when the talons reach you
In the darkness, and into the pain
Hope can be made from the ones that need you
Not from sharpness right into the vein
Would you heed my words if I asked you not to die on me?
Would you be the first to listen or flee selfishly?
I can understand the pain, thought you may not sense that
It's the innocence to blame, the joy that you once had..."
To me there is nothing more beautiful than human vulnerability. It's the individual choice to give all of themselves and hold nothing back, and hope that someone would find you, take you, and hold you closely to show that if they could, they'd shelter you from the world we're all in. It's the ultimate risk: that many will reject you as well. Like the author who's book could be reviled by society or burned with hate, the musician who is universally adored or ridiculed, the lover who when offered lips can kiss them or severely bite them. One must encounter the pitch-black darkness for eternities before that same person can achieve some source of content. May you continue to be vulnerable as will I in my own life, because to do otherwise is to merely exist and not live, and not to experience true love versus true pain.
Live on. :-)
| Name: Jessica | MY URL: Visit Me |
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This is one hella beautiful page...
| Name: Echo | MY URL: Visit Me |
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Lovely site - I enjoyed your poetry very much. Good luck!
| Name: Lara | MY URL: Visit Me |
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Wow, I couldn't help but read some of youe journal entries, at first, I was like, "Oh, man, this is none of my bussiness." But, then I realized that you were the one who put them on the internet anyway. Well, I guess I just wanted to tell you that your not alone out there. I've pretty much lost everyone in my life and have turned to writing to help me sort it all out. I don't think you actually wrote enough to make me say, "I understand," but, if you ever want feedback or someone to IM at random hours... my screenname is thegreenone32
| Name: The Lexail | MY URL: Visit Me |
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Where are you dear?
Come and find me.
| Name: michael |
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I enjoy reading your work.
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I love the graphics on your site. :)
| Name: leo da lion |
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Your strength amazez me. Your site is gorge and I can tell you are too--on da inside and da out.