Comments:
Terrific IDEA and a great web-site! But I though the following corrections/imporvements might help: 1) the first statemt from "About Dr. Libis" page sounds confusing. I'm sorry I didn't get it. Maybe 'from' is redundant... 2) "Edison office" page: 1st statement also: 'quite' is a typo (should be 'quiet'). If it were me I would better say "well-accesible yet quiet", not "busy..." - who needs to mess with a busy street one more time. And some link with/or directions would help. 3) Edison page, second paragraph: maybe it's just me but it would sound better either as 'there is plenty of magazines and comfortable chairs' or 'there are numerous magazines and comfortable chairs'. Also after that : "while you wait" is incorrect, it should be "while you are waiting". And in parenthesis it would be more truthfull and appealing if it were something like this: "although it mostly applies to parents - patients rarely have to wait in our office [to be treated]" Maybe there is something else on the level of 'politically' correct English Please do not take this message as any kind of offence or disregard. Look at it as my blunt effort to aprticipate in the WEB-site's 'growing up'. Best Regards, A.Leontiev

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